An excellent presentation of your pitched idea, which is reflected in your treatment. I am impressed by the way you have managed this work given you are waiting for an alternative idea. You have focused on targeting a youth culture which has a clear target audience. I particularly like the theme of shooting on a beach - but I feel that this would need to be studio based - November is notoriously cold, short of daylight and potentially wet! I also think that you treatment works but it needs more attention to detail in relation to how you would visualise the concept - I do not think you have enough shots planned and this will need editing and developing when you storyboard this week. Well done
An excellent presentation of your pitched idea, which is reflected in your treatment. I am impressed by the way you have managed this work given you are waiting for an alternative idea. You have focused on targeting a youth culture which has a clear target audience. I particularly like the theme of shooting on a beach - but I feel that this would need to be studio based - November is notoriously cold, short of daylight and potentially wet!
ReplyDeleteI also think that you treatment works but it needs more attention to detail in relation to how you would visualise the concept - I do not think you have enough shots planned and this will need editing and developing when you storyboard this week.
Well done